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Summary:

 

Translated English version of already in German language existing second part of my Paul Prior pentalogy "Mehr von Paul". I stronlgy recommend reading the first part "Paul" before paying attention to this one, because it's based on part number one.

To give you a rough overview of the time: Part two is playing about one year after the epilogue of part one and roughly two years after the beginning of the whole story. So we are talking about quite a generous time frame. 


Rated: LoA-16
Categories: Sonstige Schauspieler, Matthew Macfadyen, Rollenbezogene Geschichten, Novel-length Characters: Celia Steimer, eigener m/w Charakter, Paul Prior
Genres: Drama, Romanze
Warnings: Erotik, Gewalt
Challenges: Keine
Series: Paul-Pentalogie
Chapters: 27 Completed: Ja
Word count: 42750 Read: 2796
Published: 12 Mar 2012 Updated: 31 Jan 2013
Story Notes:

 

To this story the same disclaimer applies as to the "Mehr von Paul" story in German! Please refer to that!

© Doris Schneider-Coutandin 2012

 

1. 2.1 by doris anglophil [Reviews - 0] (1607 words)

 

This is a test-version, please be aware that no beta-reading was done on it yet. I am no English native speaker, so please don't expect too much of it. My English is good but far from being perfect. Thank you for your kindness and understanding.

If the kind reader has any remarks on this story, please don't hesitate to tell me and leave a comment, many thanks!

Update October 3, 2012: Proof-read version coming soon!!!

Update January 2, 2013: All chapters are proof-read and corrected now. Have fun while reading! 

 

2. 2.2 by doris anglophil [Reviews - 0] (2207 words)

 

Please not that this chapter is a rather steamy one.

3. 2.3 by doris anglophil [Reviews - 0] (1506 words)

 

We now are leaving the more saucy parts, turning to daily life issues, which Paul has to face - and which isn't as easy for him because of the nature of his mental disposition.

4. 2.4 by doris anglophil [Reviews - 0] (1509 words)

 

Story continues with Paul and his job... 

5. 2.5 by doris anglophil [Reviews - 0] (1751 words)

 

Please notice the following:

1. Chapter contains erotic passages in a moderate way

2. In this chapter the Prior family bungalow is described. This is based on a really existing building, also concerning the location in Southeast London. Stupid me didn't download the floor plan back then (ages ago!) but I was able to make a "copy" of it with a very basic archtitectural programme just of my memory months later. Could be its not totally true to the original, on the other hand I was then free to add design which would suit Paul and Doro very well. You can find a picture of this floor map underneath the chapter in the RA-forum.

6. 2.6 by doris anglophil [Reviews - 0] (1315 words)

 

I tried hard to get along with colloquial language in this translation, which turned out to be a tough job.

7. 2.7 by doris anglophil [Reviews - 0] (1503 words)

 

Paul will return to New Zealand soon and has to cope with the past, with all things that were forming him when he was growing up there. He still has his difficulties with showing emotions as you can clearly see from many of the chapters.

8. 2.8 by doris anglophil [Reviews - 0] (1788 words)

 

Paul ventures in the journey to his home country. Only few people can imagine how exhausting it is to fly to New Zealand.

9. 2.9 by doris anglophil [Reviews - 0] (1710 words)

 

So, Paul has arrived in New Zealand and travels on to Central Otago. He comes through magnificent landscapes and passes beautiful spots when driving there.

10. 2.10 by doris anglophil [Reviews - 0] (1779 words)

 

Paul faces new challenges, new obstacles.

11. 2.11 by doris anglophil [Reviews - 0] (1685 words)

 

Paul has some major flashbacks here and then... he meets a face from the past.

12. 2.12 by doris anglophil [Reviews - 0] (1577 words)

 

Things are taking the, however expected, complicated turn...

13. 2.13 by doris anglophil [Reviews - 0] (1645 words)

 

Will Paul be able to stand the confrontation with Jackie? Will she give him a hard time? Will he break down and jeopardise the success of all therapies he went through?

14. 2.14 by doris anglophil [Reviews - 0] (1782 words)

 

Paul comes to terms with Jackie, but misses Doro so much.

15. 2.15 by doris anglophil [Reviews - 0] (1712 words)

 

Paul finally reunites with his wife!

16. 2.16 by doris anglophil [Reviews - 0] (1687 words)

 

The couple enjoys being together again - and more surprised ahead!

17. 2.17 by doris anglophil [Reviews - 0] (1424 words)

 

Paul, Doro and  the kids on a visit to Miss Seagar.

18. 2.18 by doris anglophil [Reviews - 0] (1581 words)

 

We learn about the Otago Goldrush.

19. 2.19 by doris anglophil [Reviews - 0] (1454 words)

 

Visiting Celia's grave and meeting Jackie...

20. 2.20 by doris anglophil [Reviews - 0] (1284 words)

 

Paul and Doro come to terms with Jackie.

21. 2.21 by doris anglophil [Reviews - 0] (1343 words)

 

Paul is a  tour-guide to his family,  a rather untrained and unskilled one, though.

22. 2.22 by doris anglophil [Reviews - 0] (1864 words)

 

Paul is haunted by the past once again - and there's more to come! But this time his chances for a more happy outcome are good.

23. 2.23 by doris anglophil [Reviews - 0] (1248 words)

 

This chapter takes Paul back to the conflict with this brother... will the Prior brothers ever be able to put the past aside? It seems there still are some explosive family issues...

24. 2.24 by doris anglophil [Reviews - 0] (1612 words)

 

The meeting continues and Paul has to bring up one last topic... will it finally be worth the effort?

25. 2.25 by doris anglophil [Reviews - 0] (1692 words)

 

Who wouldn't die to see Paul Prior in a tuxedo??? And we get to know a little more about the Maori in this chapter.

26. 2.26 by doris anglophil [Reviews - 0] (921 words)

 

Maori language ahead... but it comes with translation, of course!

27. 2.27 by doris anglophil [Reviews - 0] (1564 words)

 

Okay... this is the final, sort of an epilogue chapter of part two.